Fisch Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 Dont Hold Me Calypso Voices melted to white noise Your hands shook themselves still When you finally closed your eyes and saw your life Did you realize that the only place you are not lonely is in your dreams And did your thoughts collapse when too many people left their insanity there When you opened your eyes again did life bloom Could short bursts of communication A wreckage of science Breath color into your lungs and accross your face Did you cough and sputter from the smoke Or did you die happy in the flames Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted April 24, 2007 Share Posted April 24, 2007 Yours is the type of writing I like. The first two lines are my favorite. -E. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fisch Posted April 24, 2007 Author Share Posted April 24, 2007 Sad but hopeful? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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