AnotherBrokenDoll Posted March 8, 2007 Share Posted March 8, 2007 Love is sweet, Love is kind, Love is pure, It makes you lose your mind. Makes you happy, Never sad, Makes everything seem true, Makes nothing seem bad. It stop the tears, Eases the blood flow, Holds you tight, Stops you feeling low. Yes yes yes, I hear you cry, No no no, Please don't die. Love may be sweet, Love may be kind, But its a broken heart, That truly makes you lose your mind. Its cuts you deep, Begins the flood, Nothing is left, To stop the blood. It will hurt, You shall feel pain, Not happiness, No nothing to gain. So maybe this is the end, Of this true sweet and kind thing, This will be the last time, I'll let you be my king. Without this love, Without you, Has got to be a better way, Maybe then i can start anew. No more love, No more pain, No more happy endings, For my soul is already slain. Goodbye true love, Goodbye dear heart, Hello new life, My skin is now my favourite piece of art. So once again, I'll carve away, At the only thing, That keeps the pain at bay. Please don't try to help, Please don't say your sorry, Don't lie to me, Don't tell me you shall worry. I won't let you in, No this time i'll really hide, Far away, Not so easy for you to find. This place you see, Is above our land, This place you see, Is held in Gods hand. I hope heaven will welcome me, Gods got to understand, Its because of you, I can no longer live on this land. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bada-Bing Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 very well placement of words and emotion, intersting twist you put on this topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
girl friend Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 Sheesh! Bloody amazing. Inspired by anything in particular Rozi? You ok? girl friend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted April 14, 2007 Author Share Posted April 14, 2007 nope but its does now lol life sucks sometimes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
girl friend Posted April 14, 2007 Share Posted April 14, 2007 Who was it about? You? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted April 15, 2007 Author Share Posted April 15, 2007 Yups... I always write poetry about me, wether its just a feeling or includes me in some way.. I know that may seem self centered but thats my way out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
girl friend Posted April 18, 2007 Share Posted April 18, 2007 so you were carving and suicidal when you wrote it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted April 19, 2007 Author Share Posted April 19, 2007 Poetry is more about what i feel like i want to do, rather then what actually happened. No i wasn't carving or suicidal. I was thinking about how great both seemed but never acted on my emotions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
girl friend Posted April 19, 2007 Share Posted April 19, 2007 Sheesh. Intense emotions going on there hun. How are you these days anyways. How are you coping? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rowboat Posted April 20, 2007 Share Posted April 20, 2007 Wow, that was an amazing piece. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted April 20, 2007 Author Share Posted April 20, 2007 Thanyou rowboat I am great these days Just living life i guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
girl friend Posted April 21, 2007 Share Posted April 21, 2007 Live it to the full! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
girl friend Posted April 21, 2007 Share Posted April 21, 2007 Live it to the full! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted April 22, 2007 Author Share Posted April 22, 2007 Woot i shall... as soon as i sleep lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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