Bentleys_n_drama Posted March 6, 2007 Share Posted March 6, 2007 I forgot who I am This place inside me Blind folded and grimmed No time to dream So dangerous outside of you This place we've found We fall into danger As our desires go down I could sense it And I don't know how to move I could ignore it But I'm just in no mood I could speak it Unfold myself But the loss of change Has left the shelf I am dying for you now And I've found the clues The deciphering codes That lead into you I tend to lack communication And the cure for everything I can't make up my mind Instead I leave all these thoughts behind It's in the way you move Baby what you doin to me Can't stand it, can't hold back Everytime I see ya get Beautiful, Beautiful -- I am a prisoner of your guilty air May we agree at hand and heart In your eyes, through your hair The dark stage stands unbare Our mute reminders, what do we dare? In this world of waves Sacrificial tares in our brains I'll win or lose Either way, you blew the fuse Face to face Messages, from outter space I wont give it back At what I've done I wont embark I wont speak, I'll gather with my part -- "I Can't Wait to See Eachother Again" I don't know, what more to ask for Going out of my mind, just to be yours Cause I been through this before Heaven has been to far behind When everything else is a fade Like a star accross the sky It's not a secret anymore I can't wait to see eachother again From tonight I know your part of the plan It's a wonderous game When your giving chase I'm your biggest fan, And I don't want this to change I can't wait to see eachother again Your all that I need You cure me completely I've got my eyes shut It's deep in my soul How I'm touched My heart what you stole I can't wait to see eachother again -- I'll love to be forever Only for your assistance Hold on to me Dont let go of the resistance I shout and scream and I try But nothing seems together Now I'm fine But totally mad It makes me sad My doubting intensions Scared of devotion Lost in confusion Deep down inside my spirit dies Deep down inside your perfection survives Lately I been lost in unimaginry muteness Disturbed by the vibrant tone That's left me dowered with sickness It's beyond my resistance, while im alone So I point out to you, The explosions are prominant Not written in stone Vitalizing my memory, just for you, gold! So here is my vision If I am the storm, will you still wonder? If I am your control, then dont take me under If I am your recognition, then why leave me with depression? If your going to play me a dream Then change my visions.... And see what I see Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brokenbird Posted March 7, 2007 Share Posted March 7, 2007 .................... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted March 8, 2007 Share Posted March 8, 2007 Very well written Remember poetry isn't about what others think as such its about your heart and how/why you write it. Sure there are poems to entertain but any that express feelings come much better when you don't try Keep up the great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AzureSkyes69 Posted March 19, 2007 Share Posted March 19, 2007 I like ur poetry it is rather sad but on the same note ..hopeful. It is true what Rozi! wrote about that it isn't at all really what others think..it should be more about your heart and why you write it. When I write my poetry it is almost like a therapy to me to get feelings & emotions out in a positive way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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