AnotherBrokenDoll Posted February 21, 2007 Share Posted February 21, 2007 For every last tear i cried, For every last time life seemed to pass me by, For every last breath i take, For this last smile i'll attempt to fake, You were my reason why. When nothing in my heart felt right, When everything i believed in lost the fight, When no one wanted to find, The reason why i seemed to have lost my mind, You were what brought me through each dark night. But now i stand here alone, Having no reason to hold this phone, What would be the point in calling, You're the one that left me falling, Then i again i think you should here my last painful moan. Why the decption, Why the lies, I coulda dealt better, Handling my own cries. Cuz here i stand, Again alone in this broken life, Now i stand, Once again holding this knife. You were my only reason not to bleed, But now your away, On this bed, I shall continuse to lay. And the thoughts of what used to be, Will take over my mind, And there will be no reason to find. So my trusty friend, Oh he'll help me bleed, I know this as, He was always one to lead. Wanting no more pain, Knowing my life you have already slain, Wanting to let go, So never again shall i feel this low. Wanting to dream, Suicide my only theme, No one left to stop me, No one left to see, This wasn't the girl, I intended to be. So sorry to you, I promise i did love, Goodbye to you, I'll tell you all about the life above. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tabbycat07 Posted February 21, 2007 Share Posted February 21, 2007 that is an amazing poem!! i wish i was that good... you are awesome! you can check out my poems on my blog at link removed they arent the greatest, but you can learn a little about me there... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheFallenShadow Posted February 22, 2007 Share Posted February 22, 2007 Rozi, Do keep up the excellent word play, it is nice to see, that you can keep up with me.....LOL hope you are well. Fallen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted February 24, 2007 Author Share Posted February 24, 2007 Hehehe go fallen love your talent Your comments always seem so nice, Kinda like cute sweet mice... Randomness lol Tabbycat Thanks and i'll check out your work Well i did check out your stuff Tabbycat it was great! Much better then mine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hold_me_close Posted February 25, 2007 Share Posted February 25, 2007 Yup, we totally need to be friends on here. We can be emo buddies swaping poems. So can we be friends??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted February 25, 2007 Author Share Posted February 25, 2007 lolz sounds like a plan lol. You should put some of your poems up here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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