When you loved me

[Steven1607307306]

Wrote this junk a few months back coming out of my first "I love you" relationship. Well I'm over her now. Decided to post this. This is actually a song, so it's quite different than my normal poetry. I do write songs too. Actually my last two poetry posts were all songs...lol.

 

 

When You Loved Me

 

I’ve seen the way you looked at me,

When you loved me.

But that was such a long time ago,

When you loved me.

I loved the way your smile shone,

When you loved me.

And now I’m stuck here all alone,

‘Cause you hate me.

 

CHORUS

One last time, Say that you love me,

Be my Valentine.

I tried to forget, it didn’t last long,

And I’ll always regret the * * * * I’ve done wrong,

To you.>>

 

I caressed every inch of your beautiful body,

When you loved me.

I held you tight & never let go,

When you loved me.

I miss the way that your soft lips felt,

When you loved me.

And now I must pay for the cards that I’ve dealt,

‘Cause you hate me.

 

 

I showed you a new world, that you never thought possible,

I gave you a reason to love, it seemed illogical

But now you’ve moved on, and there’s nothing I can do,

So I lay awake at night thinking why I’m without you,

And now you can, rest at night without me,

But at least you have someone you will love eternally,

It’s just a shame that someone,

Isn’t me.

 

[NKP]

I love it, great work steven, keep it up

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Thats amazing, you have done really well. Break ups really suck i'm glad you're over her now though. Plus a good song came out of it to