blu87ro Posted January 10, 2007 Share Posted January 10, 2007 On a late winter night I took my bag and I moved on I held my life in a cup And I moved on I looked back Just one more time With a sad, sad smile And I moved on I felt helpless for so long It was time To change the road So I moved on Didn’t know Where I was going But that was my way So I moved on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
desertnomad Posted January 10, 2007 Share Posted January 10, 2007 I like it. Short but says alot. I have been there too more then once.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted January 10, 2007 Share Posted January 10, 2007 I like it too, it rocks!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
run_little_rabbit Posted January 10, 2007 Share Posted January 10, 2007 "I held my life in a cup" ...hit that one right on the nose! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blu87ro Posted January 10, 2007 Author Share Posted January 10, 2007 Well, thanks for the comments. I wrote the poem in such a hurry ( just an impulse of the moment) and I had the impression that it's undone... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted January 12, 2007 Share Posted January 12, 2007 Nope i really like it and think you did great well done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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