blu87ro Posted January 9, 2007 Share Posted January 9, 2007 I lay my head down my pillow I shut my eyes But I can’t sleep I think I’m sleepless All kind of thoughts Haunt me inside Some are sweet Others just bitter I’m sleepless I turn on the light But outside it’s still night I turn on the TV But everything’s reran I’m sleepless I walk accross the room I get panicked I get happy Or just confused I’m sleepless I turn on the computer No one to chat with Just a message in the mailbox No reply button I’m sleepless I open the door No one’s there Just the silence of the dark I open the window It’s too cold I’m sleepless I look at the clock It’s already late Or just too early I welcome the morning I’m sleepless Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gfein347 Posted January 9, 2007 Share Posted January 9, 2007 I have insomnia, and often feel exactly some of the things you describe in your poem. It is both accurate and well written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted January 9, 2007 Share Posted January 9, 2007 Great work. Yeah i feel like that alot of the time. Hope things get easier! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blueangel Posted January 9, 2007 Share Posted January 9, 2007 You weren't exactly asking for advice about this, but I'll give ya some anyway! I am sleepless when I am physically or emotionally or socially discontent. It takes a very comfortable bed, a unique pillow that I got from my chiropractor, no light, just silence. I have to hold something beside me and put a pillow between my legs. However, I still toss and turn in a light sleep throughout the night. But I have found that when I am holding someone else or they are holding me, I stay still for them. I fall asleep almost automatically when this happens. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blu87ro Posted January 10, 2007 Author Share Posted January 10, 2007 I usualy go to sleep late, but just because I stay on the internet chatting or so... that doesn't bother me. But there are some nights ( like two days ago when I wrote the poem) when I just can't sleep... that's what I hate... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnaintdoe Posted January 17, 2007 Share Posted January 17, 2007 im 13 and i feel exactly the way you feel. can't sleep! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted January 17, 2007 Share Posted January 17, 2007 LOL, same here, most of the times I can't seem to fall asleep when I want to. If I sleep tooe arly then I tend to wake up very late or if someone wakes me up then I simply would not fall asleep again. So I either stay chatting online at times, be here at ENA or go on for countless hours playing checkers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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