chai28jm Posted December 16, 2006 Share Posted December 16, 2006 i know i said i was going to post another peom but this came to me and i wante dto share it . and i hopefully i can get every one opion who take the time to read it .. even a short one will do.. and if you u dont please state as well. open minded. thank u unfarturenet love deep in love i was so close, i could hear the honey making bees buss the light of happiness i was finally be pulled from darkness i have seen my world gathering together just knowing we had each other my life became perfected the meaning of life i deteched a phone call from an angel whisper every thing i wanted no pain from the past no longer hunted i was finally feeling appericated to her love i was deicated countless night on her called waited hear her voice say how are you my beloveth and only death can let us parted for this was what i believeth but my angel wasnt to stay she was only to point me to the right place and i was never to even seen her beautifull face at first i lost and confuse i have never felt so use my feeling felt abuse and my heart was scared my love to her i pleaged to god simliar to moses, she was my mighty rod my love will never dies and my life have become santufy and i realise she had made me so wise i love you jess and my heart hugs your heart on a picknic basket full ok kisses. till our heart meet again but for now i will close my eyes and account to ten and remember every laugh and tears we shead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doyathink Posted December 16, 2006 Share Posted December 16, 2006 I'm glad to see your still writing chai. Very heart felt and sad. I have to ask you this, did she die? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chai28jm Posted December 16, 2006 Author Share Posted December 16, 2006 no she didnt die but i never heard from her again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doyathink Posted December 16, 2006 Share Posted December 16, 2006 Oh dear. How long were you two together? If I might ask. You dont have to answer that if you dont want to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chai28jm Posted December 16, 2006 Author Share Posted December 16, 2006 4 month never long time. but i really open to her. i wasnt that open with anyone before. but even though wa sso short it felt i know her all my life Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doyathink Posted December 16, 2006 Share Posted December 16, 2006 Oh some of the short relationships are the sweetest. Your such a sweet guy....I hope your doing ok. By Your poems, it doesnt sound like you are even close to being over her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ellie2006 Posted December 16, 2006 Share Posted December 16, 2006 Chai, Thanks for coming back to share this poem; it's beautiful. I hope you're feeling better today. Please let us know how we can help. Hugs, Ellie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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