dil Posted December 3, 2006 Share Posted December 3, 2006 Foolish Boy Foolish, foolish boy! She uses you like a cheap toy. Little holes poked into your heart. I can see you falling apart. Her vile pretty eyes Her beautiful disguise Hiding something… inhumane. Boy, you are truly silly and lame. I can see you falling All over yourself For a mere glance For a mere chance She’s not an angel. She’s not stunning, nor kind. Why must you unravel and unwind? She makes you fall and crawl. Perhaps you like the pain. Maybe you like to be maimed. I don’t see why - You want tears in your eyes. Foolish, foolish boy! She uses you like a cheap toy. Why not let your love be earned? When will you ever learn? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JustYourAverageGirl Posted December 3, 2006 Share Posted December 3, 2006 i like this poem! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted December 3, 2006 Share Posted December 3, 2006 Cool poem, thumbs up!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dil Posted December 3, 2006 Author Share Posted December 3, 2006 thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkling Posted December 4, 2006 Share Posted December 4, 2006 This is great, makes me wince a little because I'm living it and I know it's the truth...but very darn good poem... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted December 4, 2006 Share Posted December 4, 2006 Oh i know that feeling. Very well written and its really true. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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