Convinced you love her more

[Sugar-Rush]

I wrote this a very long time ago, when i was in a bad place, ...well not a bad place as such just a very insecure one, i hate this poem, not only its content but it just feels all wrong to me, i personally think it's rubbish. I would love your opinion please, don't worry about offending me.

Sugar xxx

Convinced you love her more.

 

You are to me,

Everything I ever wanted anyone to be

 

You are what I want now,

What I wanted then and what I'll want forever more

 

You are a good person,

Hiding in a deep dark persons shell

 

You are exciting,

You make my heart skip and butterflies rush inside

 

You to me,

Are more than anyone before

 

To you,

She is more, more than me, more than us

 

Why?

[eleanorrigby1]

I wrote a poem on a similar theme called Not Her I posted it a couple of days. THat poem to me is what this is to you, full of pain and anguish and a painful reminder of feeling second best.

 

I liked it.

[chai28jm]

i like it .. but i feel you hold back your feeling and did want to express too much.. but it was good