darkling Posted November 28, 2006 Share Posted November 28, 2006 I wrote this when I was depressed about having an 'encounter' with someone I've loved for more than a decade.... She smiles up at me, a shine in her eyes. This day is long overdue, two souls meshed into one beating heart, the love flowing through. She looks right at me, searching for something I hope she finds. Her breath gentlly fills my nose, strawberry roses in my mind. She whispers softly, telling me it's alright, it can't be so wrong when it all feels right Above me she smiles, Her silken hair streams down her face, her hands on my chest I've found my place. A place of love, free of all the pain and hate, she's not for me her heart isn't mine to take. She's gone from me, an angel under glass, her eyes are dead, just a photograph. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ellie2006 Posted November 28, 2006 Share Posted November 28, 2006 Darkling, this is truly wonderful ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkylinesTurnstiles Posted November 28, 2006 Share Posted November 28, 2006 hey darkling, that is really good.I love it.i hope you write some more stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted November 28, 2006 Share Posted November 28, 2006 Thats so sad! Love can be such a great thing yet it tears people apart so often. I hope you feel better soon and remember theres so many more girls out there, although i bet you don't want to hear that... I love the poem though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkling Posted November 29, 2006 Author Share Posted November 29, 2006 Thank you for the kind comments, I appreciate them and it makes me smile knowing that someone else can enjoy something of mine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survictor Posted November 29, 2006 Share Posted November 29, 2006 Very tender. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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