darkling Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 Through the darkness there is light hope shines brightly through the night Around my dreams of hope and chance shadows of doubt circle and dance What stands beyond the bright lights gleam escape from hell, this shattered dream Through my pain the days grow long wishing away this life gone wrong I try to run, turn and flee but I can't, the darkness is me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roasted Carrots Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 I just wanted to acknowledge that someone has read your poem. It's very touching. Keep writing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Layword Posted November 21, 2006 Share Posted November 21, 2006 Lawlerskaters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TxRedheadGuy Posted November 22, 2006 Share Posted November 22, 2006 Fits how I feel pretty darn good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadows Light Posted November 22, 2006 Share Posted November 22, 2006 Through the darkness there is light hope shines brightly through the night Around my dreams of hope and chance shadows of doubt circle and dance What stands beyond the bright lights gleam escape from hell, this shattered dream Through my pain the days grow long wishing away this life gone wrong I try to run, turn and flee but I can't, the darkness is me I love it!!!! it speaks to me. I've always been attracted toward the Light moving toward OPTIMISM and looking for the silver lining in a situation. and yes.... its painful to be see the darkness play with someone and see them mired in the consequenses of their own making. Their own jail cell. If you can still see the light, and you still believe in HOPE then you are not Darkness... you've simply lost your way. You are the only one who can walk the line.. and walk your journey. No one can do it for you. I love the poem... thank-you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Siraf Posted November 24, 2006 Share Posted November 24, 2006 That was a great poem =) Short and strong. I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted November 24, 2006 Share Posted November 24, 2006 Powerfull poem! I love the change in it and the way you set the ending up. Really well written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkling Posted November 29, 2006 Author Share Posted November 29, 2006 Thanks for the comments...this is by far still my favorite one, not because I think it's all that well written but because of what it says. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dil Posted November 29, 2006 Share Posted November 29, 2006 good twist at the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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