dpressedone89 Posted November 14, 2006 Share Posted November 14, 2006 comatose, i lay on the floor in between the lines, snow white death is waiting now for only me to find your grip around me tightens as i lose my breath no one can save me now from your toxic radiance cocaine made me crazy welcome holy death reasons no one can find they hide in plain view in between the lines -stitches a poem about cocaine, for anyone who missed my gleaming analogies. well oppinions are welcome and appreciated, thank you all for reading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dako Posted November 14, 2006 Share Posted November 14, 2006 Very nice. Reminds me of wasting money in search of inner beauty. It was seldom worth the cost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted November 15, 2006 Share Posted November 15, 2006 I really like your poetry! It really does have something unique about it. (don't worry thats a good thing ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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