SkylinesTurnstiles Posted October 31, 2006 Share Posted October 31, 2006 Its not done and its get bad towards the ens but your thoughts would be nice My teeth sink into skin, The blood dribbles down my chin. I'm a hunter of the night, I'm alone i won't let anyone in. I'll sleep in the day, Run in the night. I'm going 2 find my coven, I'll put up a fight. I'm a death dealer, Lycans are what I bring down. I battle them everywhere, All over the town. I've seen things, You will never see. I'm 500 years old, I like being me. I don't eat real food, I feed on blood. I run from the sun, Splashing in the mud. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AntiLove_SuperStar Posted October 31, 2006 Share Posted October 31, 2006 Very very relevant to todays date. I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted October 31, 2006 Share Posted October 31, 2006 Ahh yes, Halloween poem about vampires and lycans, cool, you rock!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted October 31, 2006 Share Posted October 31, 2006 lolz go lizzie! Great poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted November 1, 2006 Share Posted November 1, 2006 I’m a hunter of the night, I’m alone i won’t let anyone in. I'll sleep in the day, Run in the night. I'm going 2 find my coven, I'll put up a fight. I’m a death dealer, I really love the part. Great poem it rocks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkylinesTurnstiles Posted November 1, 2006 Author Share Posted November 1, 2006 Thanks guys!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallout Posted November 1, 2006 Share Posted November 1, 2006 Wow yeah that's so cool! Really an awesome poem...I can see it get published you should try it well maybe next year right before halloween heheh... "I don’t eat real food", "I'm 500 years old" and "Splashing in the mud" are the only lines I find a wee bit out of place so maybe you can replace those to make it even better...but really all in all great stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkylinesTurnstiles Posted November 2, 2006 Author Share Posted November 2, 2006 Thanks fallout yeah i know there bits are lame but i couldnt think of anything else that ryhmes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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