Re-Born xxx

[Sugar-Rush]

I wrote this for the three men who made me, well me and for the one man who loves me for it:

 

You were my first love,

I gave you my innocence,

My heart, my soul, my dreams,

My secrets, my body, my mind,

My childhood, my womanhood, my trust.

 

You let me find out from her, at my birthday party, that what I'd given you wasn't enough, she tempted you with her high tide, and you jumped in.

 

You were my first dream,

You were everything I had dreamt of for an eternity,

You were the most beautiful boy in the world,

You had the blondest hair and the bluest eyes,

You were dangerous but you made me safe,

You drove so fast, but you loved me so slow,

You made time stand still for us.

 

You left me for him, why was I the last to know? Why did I believe you could be so perfect, you'll never know how much I cried for you.

 

You were so innocent and so alone,

So sweet, so open so true,

Slowly I gave myself to you.

Being burnt it the past only made me want you more,

You were the source of knowledge I craved,

You were the answers to my continual questions.

You blew life back into my deflated heart,

You showed me a new way of being me.

 

You hit over and over again, you broke my ribs my nose my arms my fingers and my toes, I kept coming back for more, you were addictive, you were dark inside, like me, I loved you most.

 

And now you,

You don't belong on this list,

You are not perfect,

You don't make me promises of everlasting love,

You don't offer me the world tied in ribbon,

You don't embellish everything with diamonds,

You are not the man of my dreams,

You weren't the man I fantasised about as a child,

The day we met I didn't go weak at the knees,

Our first kiss was not a foot-popping experience.

 

You, you are my future, you're real, you make me real, you complete me, you know me, thank you.

 

xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

[vesper]

thanks for this it is lovely!

 

 

And now you,

You don't belong on this list,

You are not perfect,

You don't make me promises of everlasting love,

You don't offer me the world tied in ribbon,

You don't embellish everything with diamonds,

You are not the man of my dreams,

You weren't the man I fantasised about as a child,

The day we met I didn't go weak at the knees,

Our first kiss was not a foot-popping experience.

 

You, you are my future, you're real, you make me real, you complete me, you know me, thank you.

 

xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

 

the part above reminds me of my ex.

[chai28jm]

that was really good .. i never read anything so deep..i love that if any please post.. again i love this peom

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

That was truly wonderfull. And so true. Love is more then fairytails. Fabulous job just a beautiful piece of work