chai28jm Posted October 28, 2006 Share Posted October 28, 2006 what is this curse why every day thing get worst and worst lost my daughter that was first i drink and drink but nothing quin-sh my thirst i feel like a bubble that waiting to burst i think i be better off in couch-en Ina back of a Hurst i no longer can live in this hurt i try and try cry and cry but something just wont let me die what is it you see when you in eyes do get lost like looking at big blue sky or do see my soul is it me or is it time is getting cold listen to my story to one i have ever told i am prisoner and i have been capture i no longer have a beautiful future love ones have me tore-sure chain up beat up kick up but i cant understand what is it they after my heart weigh me down i feel i am carrying a ton my feeling getting numb and every one asking how come bills rises money decreases demand greater food lesser can someone tell when thing will be better because i so sick of my life being bitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted October 28, 2006 Share Posted October 28, 2006 i'm sorry for what you have to carry around with you. your poem is very sad and deep. it reminds me of Tupac's poetry, except that he never stopped looking up and fighting for a better life no matter how hard things were. if you aren't familiar with his non-musical work, i think you should check it out. much of it can be found online. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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