Gecko Posted October 23, 2006 Share Posted October 23, 2006 Hospital Anxious now, pacing through the halls. Steer past the people that frighten. Waves of stress from every direction, Jading my mind, Sucking the energy which feeds. Retreat to the darkness, Enveloping me in panic. As heads crack the wall, The demons come crawling back. Chained to the floor, I bleed to purge. I walk through the corridors, Time becomes a blur. Silent ticking flows like a snail. Unconscious, then conscious again. They come now, Impartial giants drag me away, Shadows following in their wake. Panic. Piercing pain, Gagging the snake slithering down my throat. Tie it tighter, tighter, please. Filled with satisfaction, But the pain… Silver salve fills my innards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted October 23, 2006 Share Posted October 23, 2006 Nice job on that poem!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted October 24, 2006 Share Posted October 24, 2006 wow thats really intense. Great poem but so sad.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted October 25, 2006 Share Posted October 25, 2006 I absolutely love the way you wrote this. Very, imaginitive... makes my mind run wild. -ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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