Dregnought Posted October 14, 2006 Share Posted October 14, 2006 Blood falls; Silently I grieve. Tears drop; Inside I hurt. Sharp metal; Slice my skin. Lost friends; To much pain. Red skin; Crimson stained sharpness. Self harm; My best friend. Death wish; Leave me alone. Broken promises; Used for sex. Starving stomach; Wish not eat. Hellish nightmare Myself care nought. Little care; From anyone here. Daily struggle; Regain lost happiness. Cursed memories; Old Love kills. Totally alone; No loving care. Whats wrong; I'm dead inside. No life; except the pain. ~~~~~ Im pretty impressed at myself. 2 words. 3 words. I stilll feel like writing more death. The title - it means Starved as in no food and little blood (from cutting) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted October 14, 2006 Share Posted October 14, 2006 So intense, thumbs up!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallout Posted October 14, 2006 Share Posted October 14, 2006 Seems you managed to put your feelings on "paper" quite well... tho the poem is too mechanical for me so to speak, it still arrises some feeling Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oh yeah Posted October 15, 2006 Share Posted October 15, 2006 you are so talented - i love it. so full of emotion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dregnought Posted October 15, 2006 Author Share Posted October 15, 2006 Thanks for the comments... it really does help! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 I really enjoyed reading that, it's very discriptive! Well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dregnought Posted October 20, 2006 Author Share Posted October 20, 2006 Thankyou so much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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