renaissancewoman101 Posted October 6, 2006 Share Posted October 6, 2006 My tormented mind. Traversing the desert of loneliness and pain. Thirst unslaked. Feelings unrequited. Laying there, dusty, torn, Worn out. Crying out for you. Forlorn and broken. Watching your shadow grow dim with the downing of the sun. Not turning back. No hope left. I reach out with a gnarled, dusty hand. Dreams shattered. Lives ruined. I die. The End. Another attempt at poetry. Hey, I may get better at this with practice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doyathink Posted October 6, 2006 Share Posted October 6, 2006 Hey Ren, I think that was great. You are very good at this! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
socks1w Posted October 6, 2006 Share Posted October 6, 2006 That was a good poem.And u r gettin better,no need to be self-conscious on the poem writing.Hey u could be a natural at this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dako Posted October 6, 2006 Share Posted October 6, 2006 Good going, Ren! Keep at it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted October 6, 2006 Share Posted October 6, 2006 Thats awesome. I totally relate to alot of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted October 6, 2006 Share Posted October 6, 2006 I really love that, great stuff! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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