Ms. Babydoll Posted October 5, 2006 Share Posted October 5, 2006 *After writing "The Essense Of You" I didn't feel quite satisfied so I took a few lines from that poem, mixed a few of my emotions together and came up with this, for my loving boyfriend Alex* My Every Desire Momentarily bought back To the wonderful thought of you Your essense so intoxicating You meet my every desire The taste of your lips So delicious and sweet Your smell So comforting and raw Your touch penetrates through me And hours later I still feel the tingle Of your fingertips brushing my skin Whispers so sincere Make my heart melt Make me fall in love with you more I could never be able to replace The overwhelming feelings You give me Everything about you seems perfect I could never ask for more I simply can't explain How much I love you As always I'm one again Momentarily bought back To the wonderful thought of you Your essense so intoxicating You meet my every desire Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted October 6, 2006 Author Share Posted October 6, 2006 can someone please comment? I'd love to know what you think! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted October 6, 2006 Share Posted October 6, 2006 I can't believe no one posted! I love it... Its good to read something about real love once and awhile! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted October 7, 2006 Author Share Posted October 7, 2006 thanks Rozi, glad you like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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