AnotherBrokenDoll Posted October 5, 2006 Share Posted October 5, 2006 Who i used to be: Sweet innocents, Pure love, A girl with a dream... Who i am: Newly corrupted, Sevre hate, Devil in disguise... Who i want to be: Honest and True, Loved beyond all, A true friend... Why i'm not: Brokeness creates pain, Pain over rules love, Friendship and hate can never be... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted October 5, 2006 Share Posted October 5, 2006 That's a powerful poem there. Ever heard of "Everyone is born a blank slate", theory on infant devellopment, well just one out of many theory. It has long been thought that out surroundings/ the environment is what influence us a whole lot and in a way turn us into who we are. According to it, we are born with no sign of malicious nor evil, none of that, it's society corrupting us. But see on the other hand, you are also responsible for your own actions, no one BUT YOU. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted October 5, 2006 Share Posted October 5, 2006 I really love your poem, it makes a lot of great points in the last verse, well done, very emotional stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted October 5, 2006 Author Share Posted October 5, 2006 Thanks for your comments guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheFallenShadow Posted October 5, 2006 Share Posted October 5, 2006 very nicely done.....keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted October 6, 2006 Share Posted October 6, 2006 Thats real good hun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted October 6, 2006 Author Share Posted October 6, 2006 Thankyou so much, i was also scared about this one. I thought i was loosing any talent i used to have but you are giving my confidence back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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