Daddy Bear Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 i cease my fantasies only to be haunted by dreams i banish my dreams and i am plagued with feelings i bury my feelings they are replaced by thoughts i stop having thoughts the music ends Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 I really like your poem, it's simple but interesting, well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 Cool, reminds me of one of Eminen's song that's about something to do with children and then he says "Until the music stops". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RelaxByWater84 Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 I like it. I like the progression of thought in it. It reminds of a poem I read for class: Its called "We Real Cool" by Gwendolyn Brooks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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