renaissancewoman101 Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 What I want, Is what I cannot have. A desire that haunts me, fills my days, is everpresent. Following me through school, occupying my thoughts. Eating away at me. Tugging at me. Filling my heart with dread and anger. Self-reproach. Self-recrimination. Dreams unspoken. Dreams shattered. Dreams never to be realized. What I want is you. You behind the glass wall. One I can see, but cannot feel, touch or smell. One that torments me in my dreams and thoughts. Yet I see, but not touch. Waking in a sweat. Anger fills me. Why oh why, does life deny me? this is my first attempt in a LONG time at poetry. Amaturish at its best Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
socks1w Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 I think its good,cause I know what ur talkin about,lol. But I do like it.U should try to write more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 I really like it, I can kinda understand where you are coming from, well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 I like it, kool!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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