NKP Posted October 2, 2006 Share Posted October 2, 2006 Your on the beach wind blowing in your hair You have never looked so good as you do right now Smile so cute Your Blue eyes tell me you need me Hair shinny in the sun Holding my hand, tells me you will never leave me Your kisses taste so sweet, makes me go crazy I know i have said it a millons times befor but i love you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted October 2, 2006 Share Posted October 2, 2006 I really like your poem, it kinda reminds me of my boyfriend when you described the blue eyes and holding hands part,well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted October 2, 2006 Author Share Posted October 2, 2006 Thanks but once again i dont like it, its to corney Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 It's so wonderful, those moments are always to store in your memory. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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