doyathink Posted September 26, 2006 Share Posted September 26, 2006 Night falls...doubts rise ...and the fear of knowing nothing creeps in. Loneliness becomes your companion ...depression becomes your friend ...the world changes shape, everything becomes alien. Sorrow emanates from you, in your soul a bleeding heart Pain is all you know ...suffering is all you practice. The demons dance insanely Pain is only eased by greater pain. A vacuum inside sucks away everything leaving you with ......nothing, emptiness. All attempts have failed, all avenues now blocked. You are behind God's back and persecution becomes your punishment. The leaves turn brown and die ......a cold wind caresses your body. Lost in a maze, searching for a way out Check............and mate ......the game is over, the battle is lost. Feel free to dance among the dead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ipso Fracto Man Posted September 26, 2006 Share Posted September 26, 2006 Every word, perfection. But how are you able to read my thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dako Posted September 26, 2006 Share Posted September 26, 2006 I feel a group hug comi....no, guess not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doyathink Posted September 26, 2006 Author Share Posted September 26, 2006 Because this is the world I live in. And this is what love does to you. This is what love is....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ipso Fracto Man Posted September 26, 2006 Share Posted September 26, 2006 I got mine from Santa Claus. I guess I was a bad boy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dako Posted September 26, 2006 Share Posted September 26, 2006 T, I'm certain that many people here love you, and want to help. You don't deserve pain, and when it eases, you'll see a new future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted September 26, 2006 Share Posted September 26, 2006 I really like your poem, it has something so mysterious about it, well done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheFallenShadow Posted September 26, 2006 Share Posted September 26, 2006 exquisite poem, someone that truly knows the suffering of a soul, that is seen with more then short sighted eyes....Well done, you said much in your writing....all i can say is that it was very very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ipso Fracto Man Posted September 26, 2006 Share Posted September 26, 2006 I lose my capacity to love, my sense of humor and my will to live, and your poem is the first thing I notice when I go online. What are the odds? Isn't it ironic... doyathink? Isn't it ironic... yeah, love really does stink. Run away with me? We can hitchhike to Belize and live off iguanas and coconuts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkylinesTurnstiles Posted September 26, 2006 Share Posted September 26, 2006 Hey. I love it.I can really relate to it.I hope you write more soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted September 26, 2006 Share Posted September 26, 2006 Wow, I think this your first time posting on the poetry forum doyathink. You're right about everything changes in the world. Dirty things always happen, some people are cruel but only you are responsible for the choices you make in life, no one else but YOU!!!!!!! Great poem by the way!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doyathink Posted September 26, 2006 Author Share Posted September 26, 2006 Thanks guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
desertnomad Posted September 26, 2006 Share Posted September 26, 2006 Fantastic poem 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigredvick Posted September 30, 2006 Share Posted September 30, 2006 chill down my spine. (good thing) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doyathink Posted September 30, 2006 Author Share Posted September 30, 2006 .....thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 30, 2006 Share Posted September 30, 2006 Its great! Keep writing i love the feeling you gave off during that poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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