Ms. Babydoll Posted September 26, 2006 Share Posted September 26, 2006 I wake late with a head filled with sand Not wanting to leave the comfort of my bed The pillow like a teddy bear Giving me comfort and warmth But I have to leave that comfort zone So I grab a pen and paper Needing to escape with my emotions The paper waiting for the pen To leave its mark But my mind is blank Yet I have so much to write My feelings impossible to discribe In words So I crawl back under the covers And lock myself away Resting my head against the pillow Feeling that comfort I was longing for But it's not enough I need my friends But their gone So for now I'm alone Looking out the window I see Spring coming alive The smell of new life and growth Making me feel lonely inside I can't take it It's not fear I pull the blinds shut And close my eyes I want complete darkness Because there is a darkness in my heart I'd rather be lonely Than searching for the comfort I was longing for Which may never come I give up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheFallenShadow Posted September 26, 2006 Share Posted September 26, 2006 Babydoll, Something written speaking so loudly as this, know that there are those of us that walk that path of darkness because of the loneliness that is felt. Very well written. thank you for sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted September 26, 2006 Share Posted September 26, 2006 You rock!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rightfromthestart Posted September 29, 2006 Share Posted September 29, 2006 "I'd rather be lonely Than searching for the comfort I was longing for Which may never come I give up" take another look at this last part... doing so 'giving up' is the comfort because you release the longing and the feelings of loneliness, the searching, when u just stop - erase those negatives and start taking the steps back up. the end is the beginning. find comfort in that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted September 29, 2006 Author Share Posted September 29, 2006 thanks rightfromthestart I get what you mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sumguy Posted September 29, 2006 Share Posted September 29, 2006 Still having trouble getting out of bed in the morning, Babydoll? Your friends will be back soon... =) Great poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted September 29, 2006 Author Share Posted September 29, 2006 thanks sumguy, that thought keeps me going, I can't wait to be back at school in 8 days!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valenski Posted September 30, 2006 Share Posted September 30, 2006 Things can seem really dull when your good friends are not around but you'll always have friends here to read and appreciate your poems. A lovely poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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