SkylinesTurnstiles Posted September 22, 2006 Share Posted September 22, 2006 Would you run even if there was no place to hide? Would you scream even if no-one could hear you? Would you live even if there was no point in living? Would you love me with your whole heart even if it was broken? Would you take me in off the streets even if i had a home? Would you tell me everything is okay even if you were scared for your life? Would you keep on trying even if there was no point? If so, what if i loved you? I ruined it i was good before but anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rachael32 Posted September 22, 2006 Share Posted September 22, 2006 yes to nearly all of them honey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted September 22, 2006 Share Posted September 22, 2006 I love it so much its real sad and good use of words Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kimmie11479 Posted September 22, 2006 Share Posted September 22, 2006 I long for the day, days the hate in your heart subsides, and you remember all the reasons you loved me. I hope for you in my life with your arms around me, holding me tight. I weep for the hour, the hour you tell me that you will never let me go. Until then my love I will keep my distance waiting, watching, hoping and weeping. I love you and always will. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRedQueen Posted September 22, 2006 Share Posted September 22, 2006 1. Would you run even if there was no place to hide? 2. Would you scream even if no-one could hear you? 3. Would you live even if there was no point in living? 4. Would you love me with your whole heart even if it was broken? 5. Would you take me in off the streets even if i had a home? 6. Would you tell me everything is okay even if you were scared for your life? 7. Would you keep on trying even if there was no point? 8. If so, what if i loved you? I ruined it i was good before but anyway 1. Yes I would. Running away from danger has little to do with hiding, as much as it has to do with escaping a fatal, or near-fatal situation. 2. Absolutely! In my opinion screaming in the presense of others is a waste of time and vocal chords. However, screaming at the top of your lungs, when completely alone surrounded by nothing but walls, silence, and space, is quite satisfying. 3. No. 4. Yes and no, it really depends on the conditions that led to your heartbreak. As long as you weren't still heartbroken over an ex, sure, why not. 5. Temporarily, of course I would. 6. Only if I truly believed that, would I say it. 7. Hell no I wouldn't! Life's too short to be wasted on futile ventures. 8. ??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 23, 2006 Share Posted September 23, 2006 Liza its great darl you didn't kill it! Each question is different for me... lifes like that i guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkylinesTurnstiles Posted September 23, 2006 Author Share Posted September 23, 2006 Yeah thank you so much everyone.i love to hear what other people think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted September 26, 2006 Share Posted September 26, 2006 I like your poem, it holds many questions to think about, well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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