NKP Posted September 13, 2006 Share Posted September 13, 2006 I am just a girl that has lost her soul Thats loves someone who doesnt love her I am just a girl who hates this life Crys herself to sleep at night I am just a girl that walks these streets That everyone makes fun of I am just a girl going crazy Crazy for your touch I am just a girl sick of life Thats no longer going to be around I am just a girl thats want someone to love her Thats all A love, A loss, A shove, A toss, It all comes back to a source, They die u die, death is sad, of course. Inevitable, can't overcome, Awful, often too much for some. Unable to find out "why?", Why they left, is this a lie? A dream, a figment of imagination? Why can't I stop that burning sensation?! I'm not afraid to go where they went. Heaven or Hell they'll both leave a dent. I've died inside, But I never cried. I guess I should have, for a release... But I don't think this pain will ever leave. I want to leave, I want to go! I want to feel WARM blood flow!! "Good-bye cruel world! Good-bye all", I whisper, I don't scream while I fall. I close my eyes, count to three.... Finally, my soul, is finally free. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 13, 2006 Share Posted September 13, 2006 wow kita.... That was just wow. Im speechless the second one just totally blew me away. Both poems are great but the second one was just so full of emotions and feeling and... all i can say is wow! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sumguy Posted September 13, 2006 Share Posted September 13, 2006 The second poem is very deep, I really like it. Do you mind if I copy a few lines into my sig on another forum? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallout Posted September 13, 2006 Share Posted September 13, 2006 awesome poet! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted September 13, 2006 Author Share Posted September 13, 2006 The second poem is very deep, I really like it. Do you mind if I copy a few lines into my sig on another forum? No its fine i dont mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted September 13, 2006 Author Share Posted September 13, 2006 Thanks everyone i am glad yous like them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted September 13, 2006 Share Posted September 13, 2006 The second poem really bought a lot of emotions out of it, it really holds some beautiful depth, well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted September 14, 2006 Author Share Posted September 14, 2006 Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrokenBlackWolf Posted September 17, 2006 Share Posted September 17, 2006 that second one was awesome kita, alot of emotion in it. tears coming to my eyes...good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted September 18, 2006 Share Posted September 18, 2006 Yea keep up with the good work Kita!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted September 18, 2006 Author Share Posted September 18, 2006 Thanks everyone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doyathink Posted September 18, 2006 Share Posted September 18, 2006 I do like the second one.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted September 18, 2006 Author Share Posted September 18, 2006 Thank you DYT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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