NKP Posted August 30, 2006 Share Posted August 30, 2006 The day is bright, the sky is blue I am to scared to leave my room, anything could be out there I use to believe i was strong, until the day it all went wrong Theres not a day that i am happy, i always end up cry Look at me i am not dead yet, but i am dying I am screaming out for help, no one cares They are just going to let me die, like i am already inside People use to care, until the day i pushed them away I want someone to hold, so one to love My pain has to go away soon, i dont know if i can live much longer I want to hear you say one thing, that you care Can you help me, help me feel alive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sumguy Posted August 30, 2006 Share Posted August 30, 2006 beautiful poem, inspires a lot of familiar images =) well written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted August 30, 2006 Author Share Posted August 30, 2006 Thanks i am glad you liked it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted August 30, 2006 Share Posted August 30, 2006 Yea, it does put a lot of creativity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted August 30, 2006 Author Share Posted August 30, 2006 Thanks, i really wasnt sure anyone would like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 31, 2006 Share Posted August 31, 2006 i loved it go kita Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted August 31, 2006 Author Share Posted August 31, 2006 Thanks rozi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted September 1, 2006 Share Posted September 1, 2006 very inspiring and strong, well done Kita Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkylinesTurnstiles Posted September 1, 2006 Share Posted September 1, 2006 i love it.go you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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