Ms. Babydoll Posted August 29, 2006 Share Posted August 29, 2006 I don't want to hurt Any longer Before I met you I was stronger Sometimes I want to cry Let all my emotions run free But I've cried so much tears That there's barely anymore left in me I wish I had someone to hold Just one person who'd always be there But everyone we love leaves us sooner or later So why should I even bother to care? I lock myself away from reality And block out the empty stares People see me sitting alone Letting out the last of my precious tears But what happens when they are finally gone? When they've dried up and disapeared Maybe I'll feel nothing Like I've always feared What's the point in trying I feel as though I've tried it all If I give up will it matter Will you hear my call? You don't seem to be hearing me now Because I won't allow myself to be weak in your eyes I'd rather hide behind a mask Until I've run out of all the lies But when I break I promise you You will see it all My fears, my weakness and my tears The day I finally fall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rain__man Posted August 29, 2006 Share Posted August 29, 2006 Beautiful... and sad. I remember those tears, they werent long ago That I cried for one who could just pack up and go. She meant the world when I thought she cared But alone in the dark, feeling nothing but scared, I found my own stregnth to look for me and move on. Will you lie down now, and break down? Give in to the dark that seems to surround? You have the chance to take what you have and get better, Some are still out there, who believe in forever... The hunt is on... are you prey, or predator? Sorry... a few cheesy lines there, but not bad for impromptu Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted August 29, 2006 Author Share Posted August 29, 2006 hehe I'm glad you like it, those lines aren't cheesy at all. I'm not very satisfied with this poem though, I wrote it in the spear of the moment, didn't really put much into it, I should try better next time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheFallenShadow Posted August 30, 2006 Share Posted August 30, 2006 Babydoll, Very well conveyed, you are articulate in they phrasing. very good, would like to read more. PM me anytime. Fallen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vandgsmom Posted August 30, 2006 Share Posted August 30, 2006 I can't rhyme my response I am hanging a sconce On the wall by my bed where the curtains are red... I did like your poem made me sad and so blue I read it while cleaning and tying my shoe... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted August 30, 2006 Share Posted August 30, 2006 Yea, it's very well written!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted August 31, 2006 Author Share Posted August 31, 2006 thanks all, I'm glad ya'll enjoyed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redrose85 Posted September 1, 2006 Share Posted September 1, 2006 babydoll, are things not going well with your Alex? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted September 1, 2006 Author Share Posted September 1, 2006 babydoll, are things not going well with your Alex? Well this past week has been a rollercoaster of emotions for me, things weren't going well and just yesterday I felt like I couldn't take it anymore and I was so close to ending things with him. But then I started thinking about all the good times we've had and all the good times we are going to have and I didn't wanna throw that away, so this morning I went to his house and we had a long chat and everything is great now. Thanks for your consern though hon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkylinesTurnstiles Posted September 1, 2006 Share Posted September 1, 2006 In love it!!I hope it gets better with alex who i dont know but i want you to be happy anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted September 2, 2006 Author Share Posted September 2, 2006 thankyou Liza Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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