NKP Posted August 28, 2006 Share Posted August 28, 2006 Your leaving tomorrow Leaving me broken Hopeless and lonely I want you to stay I need you to stay Your the only one keeping me sane How am i going to be when your gone? I would do anything Just for you to stay Right now I feel like a Bird A bird with broken wings Trying to fly But not getting anywhere What am i going to be like when you leave? Well just remember i will always love you You will be in my heart forever And i am going to be hopeless witout you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
princess81 Posted August 28, 2006 Share Posted August 28, 2006 That was deep and I could relate to it due to my situation. Ya hit someone you wasnt expecting to thanx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted August 28, 2006 Share Posted August 28, 2006 awww, kita I really like your work, all your poems hold so much emotion. I really like this one, I guess it's cause I know what it's like to say goodbye to someone you love, this poem sorta brought it all back to me. Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted August 28, 2006 Author Share Posted August 28, 2006 I dont want to let you go I want to hold you in my arms forever Your the only one i see Your the only one i want I cant sleep when your not with me When i am not with you, i am not living Your leaving, leaving me here Leaving me with a broken heart Leaving me empty I just dont think i can go on without you hun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted August 28, 2006 Author Share Posted August 28, 2006 Thanks princess81 and thanks ms baby doll Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thursday Posted August 28, 2006 Share Posted August 28, 2006 Yeah, that actually was very touching, good writing! I like the methaphor of the bird.. Thanks & I hope you're doing better soon.. just remember you're not alone . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted August 28, 2006 Author Share Posted August 28, 2006 Thanks thursday Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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