Ms. Babydoll Posted August 28, 2006 Share Posted August 28, 2006 *For Alex P* Your eyes dazzle Like cascading crystals Mystery lingers And mix like liquid Together forming a shade of blue I ponder in thought And wander astray Time seems to pass so slowly And everything stands still Creating a silent eternity My blood boils And my heart melts As heat penetrates the air I find myself complete As I look into your blue eyes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 28, 2006 Share Posted August 28, 2006 I like that alot it was very well written! I like it how you dedicated it to someone as well its sweet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
princess81 Posted August 28, 2006 Share Posted August 28, 2006 That was nice it flowed good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted August 28, 2006 Author Share Posted August 28, 2006 thanks, glad ya'll like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iamteddybearfeelmecuddle Posted August 28, 2006 Share Posted August 28, 2006 I like that poem. You can almost experience the feeling right there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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