EmptySoul Posted August 26, 2006 Share Posted August 26, 2006 A wrote this a couple days ago, just venting, trying to hold on, stay here... don't put your faith in me i'm a fake smile on a suicide and i'm not sure this can last i'm fading fast and i've fallen once again i'm bleeding in a smoky haze drugged up and reckless push the pedal to the floor turn the music up let's wreck this close my eyes take a drag, a hit wait for the big crash i'm bleeding in my hands (are you bleeding thanks to me? i'm sorry) they all run together their words all sound the same truth or lie buit it's all good enough because none of it matters anymore so pretend for just a little while take my hand tell me everything you dreamed of, everything you wanted me to hear and then please just finish me finish me off... (oh, we both know you wouldn't) i can't make the choice so i'll let the odds make it for me i wanted you (needed loved) but i couldn't last so it's eyes closed music up waiting for the crash. and here's something i wrote yesterday on a different subject so crush me daily with your words your tone your ******** i don't feel the slightest emotion but rage i hate you and everything you are this isn't teenage angst where i'll forgive you one day this is where it stays i'll always feel this way your ****'s not justified so take every word you screamed and choke on it all all you gave is rage and insanity i needed something else you'll die alone because you made it that way but the sad thing is i will too. -E. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sumguy Posted August 26, 2006 Share Posted August 26, 2006 Watch out Linkin Park... =) Great poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted August 26, 2006 Share Posted August 26, 2006 wow. thats really amazing. i could imagine it put into lyrics.. heard a lot of songs with similar messages. youve got a lot of talent. well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted August 26, 2006 Share Posted August 26, 2006 revealing, depressing, beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dako Posted August 26, 2006 Share Posted August 26, 2006 Feels like familiar ground. Thanks, ES. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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