NKP Posted August 23, 2006 Share Posted August 23, 2006 Kiss me and you have to stay Dont leave me here lonely Give me you love And i will give you my love I will hold you forever And i promise i wont let you blow away And i promise you will forever be in my heart When you kiss me its like i am in heven When your out of my sight i am in hell So dont leave me Give me your love Give me your heart And i will give you mine If your going to leave Leave me now before i cant let you go If your going to stay You have to stay forever I wont let you go babe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted August 23, 2006 Author Share Posted August 23, 2006 I wrote this about my ex bf You were in a car Driving as fast as you could You felt like no one cared The only answer you saw was to let go You reached to a cliff But you didnt slow down You werent planing too You droved off it Blew yourself up They tried there hardest to keep you alive But you died You try to make me promise you that i wont cry But i cried and i will always remember you I just wished i told you i felt the same way as you And you might still be here now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PRSOV Posted August 23, 2006 Share Posted August 23, 2006 Hi there kita, I think those are well written poems, good use of words. Please keep writing, I really like your work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nottoogreen Posted August 23, 2006 Share Posted August 23, 2006 Hi Kita, He left you like that? How sad, IIRC you never told us. It's great you let it out though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted August 23, 2006 Share Posted August 23, 2006 I love both poems and yes it must be a real tough one that he commited suicide without even warning you about it, now that's now. I'm glad you're pouring out all your emotions, keep it up b/c it's gonna make you stronger. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 27, 2006 Share Posted August 27, 2006 wow kita you have been through alot haven't you. Both poems are amazing and i hope you can keep expressing yourself through them. Please keep talking to people on here cuz thats what we are here for! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted August 28, 2006 Share Posted August 28, 2006 fabulous stuff!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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