BurningInside Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 I've never written poetry before but I am a lyricist. So this is just a short little something. Yes I know its terrible, but as I said. On the spot. Efil Sport a smile once in a while deep down inside i know you writhe, just can't help the hate, hate of being alive. No one sees you cry and not one knows how you want to die. So in love but its not enough, A glance in the mirror brings you to your knees begging that one can do as you please, You'd take this knife to end your life, so easy to create, why not to take? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted August 23, 2006 Share Posted August 23, 2006 Another thumbs up, it's great!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steven1607307306 Posted August 23, 2006 Share Posted August 23, 2006 It's okay, you should practice your meter, since you're a lyricist and all. It's pretty good though for on the spot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
37
Recommended Posts