valenski Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 I know I walk around with me head held high But the truth is inside my sad heart cries She's so far from me now and its all for her good Why cant I be happy, things aren't as they should People pass by with wide smiles and vibrant hello And I cant help but wonder why the hell are they so melo In a slum right now, not feeling so well But I mask my melancholy so no one can tell Now life isn't so grand without her around Pass rock bottom now much lower than ground How do I do it day in day out Hold my chest high and walk with seem less doubt But I hope she is happy and living life to its fullest 'Cause I'd sacrifice my own for her to have the best So on I'll go with this charade and smile when I don't feel like it All the best to you my dare, I miss you and sadness, I'll fight it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steven1607307306 Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 Pretty good, you wear a disguise so no one knows how hurt you really are inside. I use that in some poetry as well, useing an external/internal contradicting guise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 Wonderful poem, esp. the wording image coming to life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valenski Posted August 22, 2006 Author Share Posted August 22, 2006 Thanks Guys, its a real life experience that spawned this poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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