Mayfairuk Posted August 20, 2006 Share Posted August 20, 2006 All of a sudden...a common phase, but what does it mean in the modern haze. Please tell me if you have ever seen, a half of a sudden or even ten. what does it look like this sudden of yours? does he have windows and tinted doors? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBHFutureAllAmerican Posted August 20, 2006 Share Posted August 20, 2006 is it wrong? too far gone? it's been way to long? why spin in circles we are one tonight just don't drop the hand of even slight this is my chance to take flight does that work? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AwdreeHpburn Posted August 20, 2006 Share Posted August 20, 2006 how will the light get through to shine? if this is yours and that is mine? I see us ending in a place not here But one where there's little left but fear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rose2summer Posted August 20, 2006 Share Posted August 20, 2006 I must walk to see the sun, Why are you here my dear hun. Where I must go, I only know. Ok, Rose is a little off today! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brando Posted August 20, 2006 Share Posted August 20, 2006 Why are you here my dear hun huh ????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rose2summer Posted August 20, 2006 Share Posted August 20, 2006 Why are you here my dear hun? Why don't you get it brando? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mayfairuk Posted August 20, 2006 Author Share Posted August 20, 2006 Thats a fantastic addition I like it lots. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mayfairuk Posted August 20, 2006 Author Share Posted August 20, 2006 I like your words but its a bit disjointed when trying to add on to what I wrote. Your words are deep and meaningful, you will amke a fantastic husband one day...my poem started with humour and double meanings...theres a lot of misery out there to last us all a life time...I intended to make people laugh, and think how words can be twisted...but in this instance not twisted for gain but to laugh at ourselves...Is this just a english thing I wonder? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mayfairuk Posted August 20, 2006 Author Share Posted August 20, 2006 Is Hun a punn? a slip of the tongue? A Hun is a Krout who ended with nowt. A Krout is a cabbage full of goodness, green and lushious but needs to be boiled...without my krout my joints wouldnt be oiled. Im here to find laugther and joy and intellegence, without such the world is menevolent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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