Ms. Babydoll Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 As I lay my head on my pillow at night Loneliness quietly crawls inside I close my eyes and vision you Laying right by my side I'm longing endlessly for your touch Needing you more than I need my next breath Wanting to kiss you whenever you are near Longing to understand your love at a intimate depth It feels like forever since we were last intimate And my heart grows weaker by the day I'd kill to taste your tantalising lips And make all my worries float away I dream of your touch and it kills me My heart aches for you so badly I find myself thinking of you every second of every minute I realise now I've fallen for you so deeply As I look at you from a distance I'm still ever so amazed at what I see You are flawless in my eyes And I wish so much you'd hear me Hear my silent calls Calling you to come and kiss me senseless Waiting for our next chance of intimacy Is like waiting for imaginary bliss Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nottoogreen Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 Very smooth and passionate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted August 18, 2006 Author Share Posted August 18, 2006 thanks nottoogreen, I write a lot of stuff like this, if you want to read more of my poems head to link removed and search Katz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nottoogreen Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 Thanks Ms. Babydoll. You're beautiful in ever way Adorable in every sway Motionless you're still incredible Every word you speak is unforgettable Your voice like sugar melting in the sun Your smile always creates sexy fun Hands so strong, yet so soft with every touch Your blue eyes furiously teasing, making me blush Defensive and tough You like playing rough Gracious and slow You allow our love to grow I've found where I belong You are in every direction I can't escape your over powering love For you are perfection Those are all great. I read some to my gf, she likes this one a lot. For how long you write poems if I may ask? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Allie. Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 breath-taking passion. love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gecko Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 Reading it makes me ache [-o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted August 19, 2006 Author Share Posted August 19, 2006 Thanks Ms. Babydoll. Those are all great. I read some to my gf, she likes this one a lot. For how long you write poems if I may ask? I've been writing since I was 8 years old, only at the end of last year I decided to take my poems public. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted August 20, 2006 Share Posted August 20, 2006 Wow it seems like it's really happening, great use of scene imagery!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted August 20, 2006 Author Share Posted August 20, 2006 thankyou much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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