Daddy Bear Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 I. At the End of the Song i can still remember when waking was a pleasure we were just immortal time was not a tunnel cravings were for food sadness was a beggar loving was forever dreams were of the future we were yet uninjured and we could never cry i can still remember no matter how i try II. Questions for EmyK is it true that you're that way now? is it going to be enough? is there pain inside your womb now? is it feeling empty much? did you revel in your overdose? did you see your mother cry? did you know you nearly killed me? did you ever wonder why? do you remember my middle name? do you think i still know yours? which of us has cried more? which one has more scars? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nottoogreen Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 Hi slightlybent, I vividly associate with I. as I went from I. via (my tale) back to I. Life is a long road, painful at times. I wish you that you find I. again, soon that is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted August 18, 2006 Author Share Posted August 18, 2006 thank you, ntg. that was very nice of you to say. i'm glad you're there again, and i won't give up trying while there's breath in me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nottoogreen Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 You are welcome, slightlybent It's seems harder for guys to let go, dunno why it is, why it took me that long. Being Vulcan might be easier. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted August 18, 2006 Author Share Posted August 18, 2006 Being Vulcan might be easier. "fascinating" postulation, yet having passed through over a decade under the influence during which time i could barely feel any emotion myself, i would have to say no. in any case, live long and prosper... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nottoogreen Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 a "fascinating" postulation, yet having passed through over a decade under the influence during which time i could barely feel any emotion myself, i would have to say no. OK, so be it. Thank You!, in any case, live long and prosper... Sure, having thrown 10+ years out of the window, do I have to add these later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted August 20, 2006 Share Posted August 20, 2006 Both of your poems are wonderful!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkylinesTurnstiles Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 hey there really great i love II. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 I love it, its really great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PRSOV Posted August 23, 2006 Share Posted August 23, 2006 Hey bent, I am particulary fascinated by I. You seem to put words into feelings in a way I have never thought before. Thank you for sharing. M man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted August 26, 2006 Share Posted August 26, 2006 one word... captured! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 28, 2006 Share Posted August 28, 2006 I love both of them and understand them both in my own little way, yet the second one really cries out to me. SlightlyBent you have done such an amazing job keep on posting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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