Daddy Bear Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 more crap by a consummate crap-artist... the poem of a broken man more honestly i cannot speak my words in lust tip not my hand but those when i am drained and weak i saw a girl like none i knew the missing portion of my soul too good a vision to be true but for a moment i was whole though briefly dreams had brought me flight her love this wretch could not afford and when she spied a greater light my presense soon was untoward it pained me so to turn away but loss had brought me crashing down for she had nothing more to say and silence... what an awful sound what lies ahead is yet unknown but i think back without regret this broken, blinded bird had flown just once before the sun would set adieu, my lovely; all godspeed though gone, you do not walk alone i pray you capture what you need the place your heart can call its home © 2006 slightlybenterprises 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iamteddybearfeelmecuddle Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 That's a mighty fine poem Bendy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PRSOV Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 That's an awesome craft of writing bent ... Shame I can't say the same for your avatar... it just freaks me out Jk, your an awesome bloke... Pe Ar Es Oo Ve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 Wow, way to go Slightlybent, now that's an art work!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dako Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 That really sucked me in. You're amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spugly Fuglet Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 Once more I bow to yoru Bentness I likey Bent well done on some garte work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarnelianButterfly Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 Very beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vandgsmom Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 I have no words that could touch that no feelings that could match it and no heart to try It was beautifuly sad, IFM; whomever she was, it is definitely her loss Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted August 17, 2006 Author Share Posted August 17, 2006 kind comments from a great bunch of people. i thank you all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Allie. Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 w-w---OW! if this is crap, i don't think i could handle your great pieces... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gecko Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 Great poem, I always love the bittersweet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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