Moon Goddess Posted August 11, 2006 Share Posted August 11, 2006 Emotions run higher Strangers praise me even more Do they speak the truth or are they just liers? But I still can't forget the person I adore I still think of him all the time Although I try to put that all behind Not for me but for you Only because you told me to I found new friends Inside family So as my heart and love ends I can find peace in all this calamity And in the end things balance out Like always in my life Always left between silence and shout And somehow a rose is but a knife Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cid Posted August 11, 2006 Share Posted August 11, 2006 nice I like it, you have talent. Is there a back story on the poem? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted August 11, 2006 Share Posted August 11, 2006 fabulous. its great, and written beautifully for something with such powerful emotions.keep writing -stitcheS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spugly Fuglet Posted August 11, 2006 Share Posted August 11, 2006 Sweet and nice I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moon Goddess Posted September 4, 2006 Author Share Posted September 4, 2006 Thanks for your comments sorry it took so long to reply school really doesn't let me come on as much as I would like to. Yes there is a sroty to it I made this poem on my family trip in New York. Everyone complimenteing me saying I've grown into a "beautiful young lady" but I couldn't forget my love here in P.R. even though it was over I still loved him and I try to forget just cuz he told me to get over him, that he didn't want to see me suffer. So in the end I felt crappy that my love with him was over but making friends with my family helped me cope a little better. Thanks for reading my poetry should be posting soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 5, 2006 Share Posted September 5, 2006 Go MG that was awesome I always love your poems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkylinesTurnstiles Posted September 5, 2006 Share Posted September 5, 2006 Wow.I love it.I hope you heart gets better Moon Goddess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted September 5, 2006 Share Posted September 5, 2006 I love your poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moon Goddess Posted September 6, 2006 Author Share Posted September 6, 2006 Thank you, I always love your poems as well Rozi!. Thanks I hope so too. Thanks you all for your comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted September 6, 2006 Share Posted September 6, 2006 Fantastic. Absolutely love it (most people know me as being very critical). Always hard losing someone, and you have taken a bad thing and made it a good thing. /hats off. -ForAnother 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moon Goddess Posted September 8, 2006 Author Share Posted September 8, 2006 Wow thanks coming from you it means lots. Yeah it is and I try to be positive( enfasis on try) but sometimes it works. My poetry means alot to me sometimes it's all I have. Thanks for reading everyone! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrokenBlackWolf Posted September 8, 2006 Share Posted September 8, 2006 holy hell...that was awesome...have you written any more? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moon Goddess Posted July 30, 2007 Author Share Posted July 30, 2007 Yeah you can check my profile to see them. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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