NKP Posted August 8, 2006 Share Posted August 8, 2006 You shine like the sun You shine like the stars in the sky You shine like nothing iv ever seen before I know i have hurt you And i cant take back what i have done Im not asking you to forgive me Im asking you if you still love me I know i love you I am crazy about you You make me beatheless, when you look at me And im so sorry for all the things i have done to you If i could take it back i would I cant tell you to come back to me I just want you to know i love you babe No matter what you will always be in my heart I know it sucks big time but yeah i ust posted it coz i was bored Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PRSOV Posted August 8, 2006 Share Posted August 8, 2006 Kita, Nice poem! I have seen quite a few of your poems you have posted before! Are you keeping like a notebook or somekind where you keep all your work? PR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted August 8, 2006 Author Share Posted August 8, 2006 No i dont keep a note book i use to but i got rid of it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PRSOV Posted August 8, 2006 Share Posted August 8, 2006 Why did you do that? Your poems are great... Did you find they were holding down your feelings? PR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted August 8, 2006 Author Share Posted August 8, 2006 I dont know why but i wished i still had it, so i can read back on em, i guess i will just start a new one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moon Goddess Posted August 11, 2006 Share Posted August 11, 2006 Sounds good Nice poem, Hopefully you will start that new one it's good to read back and see your work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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