dpressedone89 Posted August 8, 2006 Share Posted August 8, 2006 stand on top of the building so far down 25 stories down 1 story ending jump and catch the wind i feel like an angel as i crash in to the ----ing ground a tear falls from an angel and im okay again true love is imortality i feel like i hit rock bottom, a place i know all too well and by the grace of an angel im okay now so i wrote this, please reply. -stitcheS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nottoogreen Posted August 8, 2006 Share Posted August 8, 2006 Hi, It's great, thank you for writing it. The feeling of dispair, the end and a new beginning through the love of an angel. Always love yourself, you deserve it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted August 8, 2006 Author Share Posted August 8, 2006 love poem fly on the back of the bird with no wings hold on for answers to an endless question fall into the abyss in the eyes of kings and never let go of my hand eyes tear up again so full of life bleeding pride and living for the sake of love on a gust of wind send a kiss to my beloved i love you more than ever you will be in my arms as the whole world burns ok another poem i can only have one thread at a time so ill post it here oppinions? -stitcheS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted August 8, 2006 Share Posted August 8, 2006 dude, you are CRAZY good with poetry! it must be a natural born thing. here i am with all these years on you and yet i find a little jealousy creeping up my spine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nottoogreen Posted August 8, 2006 Share Posted August 8, 2006 Lovely and lively. Keep going, just put more into this thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted August 8, 2006 Author Share Posted August 8, 2006 i have another one but its kinda long and very creepy and probably offensive it diserves its own thread if i decide to post it so these two are it for now -stitcheS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nottoogreen Posted August 8, 2006 Share Posted August 8, 2006 Well, you could write some about self-love, love of life, overcoming adversity, Staying strong... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted August 8, 2006 Author Share Posted August 8, 2006 yes but those would take conscious effort from the intellectual side of my brain which is temporarily out of order, the arts and emotion display is currently the main attraction. besides self love is vanity, self correction and purification is public service in my oppinion. improving the person you and the rest of the world encounter, -stitcheS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nottoogreen Posted August 8, 2006 Share Posted August 8, 2006 OK, some reading perhaps?: Let me know what you think. It may well be OT here, PM me if you like. Reply there if you like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted August 9, 2006 Share Posted August 9, 2006 feeling a little bad, because ive responded to a few poems and i hope you dont think im just on a flow of responding.. because ive bypassed some.. now.. that sounds evil! i think you have a real skill for poetry. i particularly like the second poem. you play with images and ideas. i think thats creative. you live for love? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted August 10, 2006 Share Posted August 10, 2006 Now that's what you called imagination, you sure made me read it twice!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted August 11, 2006 Author Share Posted August 11, 2006 you live for love? yep, its all i have and all i need. -stitcheS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nottoogreen Posted August 11, 2006 Share Posted August 11, 2006 yep, its all i have and all i need. -stitcheS I am proud of you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 thanks for the responce. my sister got married yesterday. and thats what someone said.. all you need in life is love. after all .. what would we be without it? i do wonder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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