lilgothicdevil5533 Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 this is more of a song rather then a poem and yes it is copy writed "take a walk" Verse one: What lives in the dark silent and unseen visit if you dare but be aware of the quiet company that never speaks, but is always there Chorus: take a walk in the dark to find such a place find the person you seek with the treasure keepsake Verse two: a place that is spooky and cold sends shivers down to your bone where evil can lurk in the dark never seen but always close making the hairs on your arm stand up straight Chorus x2 Verse three: they watch your from the shadows awaiting the treasure that you rightfully guard make sure they dont see hold it close kiss him one last time... Chorus x3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sumguy Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 That's really good! Have you ever considered picking up a guitar and strumming a few chords to go along with it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilgothicdevil5533 Posted August 2, 2006 Author Share Posted August 2, 2006 well im currently learning to play the bass guitar and im trying to write the chords to go along with it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 That's a well thought lyrics, ah I like the use of suspense!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilgothicdevil5533 Posted August 2, 2006 Author Share Posted August 2, 2006 thank u Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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