atticus Posted July 26, 2006 Share Posted July 26, 2006 hey, I just wrote this real quick... it has something that I like about it, even though not every line rhymes... tell me what you think. dearest lover, I just want you to know, you're beautiful! in all that you are and everything you do, from the bottom of my heart; dearest lover, I love you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sally00 Posted July 26, 2006 Share Posted July 26, 2006 link removed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coollady1957 Posted July 26, 2006 Share Posted July 26, 2006 I like your poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted July 27, 2006 Share Posted July 27, 2006 I like it too and by the way don't be afraid of telling him what you feel, just say it, I'm sure he'll appreciate hearing that from you!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yummy Posted July 31, 2006 Share Posted July 31, 2006 Yeah nice poem, but try to make it longer coz its nice! Try putting more emotions.. link removed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 yeh it is nice and yeh i agree try make it longer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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