Daddy Bear Posted July 24, 2006 Share Posted July 24, 2006 link removed opening a tin of her skeletons and juniper cut my finger open on the rough edge of the past god, he died from laughing hard knew that i would disregard rivers run with bodies and the clocks move way too fast burning through another day Damacles and Tanqueray hanging by a shoelace and i hope the string won't break trying to look innocent rub myself with cinnamon i hit a s____y note again, i have to rewind this tape coyotes hit the fashion show spotlight and incisors glow this is where i... what past, present and future tense Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AwdreeHpburn Posted July 24, 2006 Share Posted July 24, 2006 hmmmm..... gotta say I really like how it starts. I like the rhythm... Not so sure about the lyrics toward the end there tho..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted July 24, 2006 Share Posted July 24, 2006 LOL, that's a very creative poem, along with the picture, it helps the words imagery. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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