neva_black_n_white Posted July 23, 2006 Share Posted July 23, 2006 endless contradiction of an image set out so vividly enough to create a picture that need no promps for description an image that displayed love far greater than explanatory an ability to enhance the intrigued minds into a world yet to be offered you portrayed honesty, creativity a beauty that could be explored yet not found - despite a map giving all direction, broken down into the simplest form you offered yourself in every way every way bar the physical form you give hope to those who believe yet take it away when they think they have it you give others everything they could dream for in all magnitudes possible you allow a false world to be created upon which they later acknoledge its fiction you play with our dreams Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted July 23, 2006 Share Posted July 23, 2006 Fantastic poem there, the last sentence is my favorite part!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted July 24, 2006 Author Share Posted July 24, 2006 smiles* thanks.. hehe. i dont think its one of my favorates but it explains exactly how someone made me feel. so. thats all i needed! hehe thanks again, neva x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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