Dako Posted July 18, 2006 Share Posted July 18, 2006 Your laugh always soothes Talking hours without pause You bring up our ways Without irony. Entwined inextricably We love each other This may be all I get My years with you. We'll meet for lunch With laughs and hugs Inside jokes, secret codes We share a grand memory. I miss you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarnelianButterfly Posted July 18, 2006 Share Posted July 18, 2006 It's so bittersweet. You make my heart ache reading this, knowing you had joy, knowing you had sorrow. Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Relationship Coach Posted July 18, 2006 Share Posted July 18, 2006 Dako, that was great! DO NOT DELETE IT! RC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted July 18, 2006 Share Posted July 18, 2006 Nice one there Dako and byt he way I think this the first of your poems I respond to, keep writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElektraHere Posted July 18, 2006 Share Posted July 18, 2006 Your laugh always soothes Talking hours without pause You bring up our ways Without irony. Entwined inextricably We love each other This may be all I get My years with you. We'll meet for lunch With laughs and hugs Inside jokes, secret codes We share a grand memory. I miss you. Oh Dako that is absolutely beautiful and heart breaking. You are a very loving and true hearted man. Please never lose those two qualities. I will be a lucky lady if I can find someone like you who shares his heart so openly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted July 19, 2006 Share Posted July 19, 2006 Does Dako delete his work?? *stares* hehe, i love memories and reflections.. so so good. Beautiful feeling. I like your poem Dako. Proud Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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