neva_black_n_white Posted July 16, 2006 Share Posted July 16, 2006 having a look at you - taking in what i see liking who you are whatever you want to be theres nothing i can judge - not from your reflection it's as though i cant find ... any imperfections i know your not angelic - but thats far from the point your you and i like it - an original coin you could look different - stand out from the crowd you could be a little quiet or maybe extra loud you dont have to fit in with all these lame trends dont want you to navigate around all these bends (im tired .. i wanted to end it .. indeed i did) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 "an original coin", that's cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaRaHmArIe8588 Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 Very well written Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Q10 Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 lol I like it as usual keep em coming neva black n white! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 Very creative indeed!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Vacancy Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 Great poem, it certainly has a good meaning behind it. Much better to be yourself then following another trend, agreed. Loved it, well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted July 17, 2006 Author Share Posted July 17, 2006 smiles at slightly bent** theres always one line you like.. giggles.. ive got you hooked!!! Q10 - bit of a fan? jokes x but thanks x was feeling in a lardy dar mood .. so positiveness indeed vacancy - thanks.. and omg, i dont understand "sheep" as i call them.. follow of the crowd.. well i do, but i love people who are original. (thats just me.. feel free to be a sheep if you want to be.. or a non sheep but follower) SaRaHmArIe8588 - why thankyou. thats what you get from just coming back from the pub.. no ium joking.. alcohol only increases my honesty anyway (i know .. poor me.. never get away with anything- althought i do hate the drunken excuse!!!!) Ailec1987 - i like to be creative thanks guys x really didnt expect that BIG a responce to be fair, with me not finishing it and all.. i really appreciate it. and yeah vancancy, the meaning is quite obvious, im glad it shows neva x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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