troublegal05 Posted July 14, 2006 Share Posted July 14, 2006 Looking back, the days seemed so lonely A tainted gem lay accross her heart, a mans promise written to the sweet smell of lust "Remember" her memory cries "Imagine" her senses replies Condemning her every passion his sweet promiscuous hands drive their way onto her hips, and like a smooth pebble to a child's touch he runs them onto her every curve So smoothly, so delicately... His breath drawn deep onto her neck sending chills onto her spine Closing her eyes, feeling his cold nose fondle her chest... All along her body screams take me! She awaits his next move A sweet kiss? A tender lip, waiting his sweet caress She can only imagine and anticipate his next move... Love has its way with the young at heart and at only eighteen she'd yet to break a heart So young so vulnerable and like a babies softest spot, so fragily placed on its head she too laid open to its dangers Her first and only love lay his hand upon her chin, gently raising her face to his anxiously cupping her delicate jaw and to her surprise he stands there gazing deep into her opened hazel eyes..."Your Beautiful" he murmurs... All the while hoping for her first kiss he waits while time consumes a precious moment Fear takes the courage of a young inexperienced love And now as she sits at home, folding her necklace into her black velvet box she remembers her first true love, broken and lost... And as a young women of nineteen her love for him still consumes her every thoughts of what could have been.... A first kiss...Now lost.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JynX Posted July 14, 2006 Share Posted July 14, 2006 Beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted July 14, 2006 Share Posted July 14, 2006 Great use of imagery and also sad at the same time, that's what makes it creative. Just wondering if this was to be dedicated to someone special or just written in general?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikeca Posted July 14, 2006 Share Posted July 14, 2006 wow....that was really good...it put me back in the memory of my first kiss. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shar82me Posted July 14, 2006 Share Posted July 14, 2006 i can just fall inlove again... nice one! __________________________________________________________ more of me - link removed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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